Tajuk 1110 : LR2 - Try to minimize the noisy words..

Kalau dalam BM, perkataan seperti "sebagaimana yang kita semua tahu' atau 'dalam proses untuk menjalankan kajian..' adalah perkataan yang bising tapi tak bawa makna apa2...

Contoh:


1. The novel is preoccupied with 'matters such as' post-colonial society and its mores, race, madness, and family relationships.

Jadi:

- The novel is preoccupied with post-colonial society and its mores, race, madness, and family relationships.

2. 'In the event' that dividends continue to fall, it will be necessary to reduce staff numbers.

Jadi:

If dividends continue to fall, it will be necessary to reduce staff numbers.

3. 'As previously argued', it was not until after the last batch of votes was counted, that the Senator was able to declare victory.

Jadi:

The Senator declared victory after the last batch of votes was counted.

4. The chairman explained the ways 'in which how' his electoral victory were unique.

Jadi:

The Senator explained how his electoral victory was unique.


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